Here\u2019s the good news: writing isn\u2019t a talent. It\u2019s a skill. And skills respond to the same cure as every other skill: reps.<\/p>\n
Not glamorous reps. Not the kind that gets applause.<\/p>\n
The kind you do in small rooms, when no one is watching, when you\u2019re a little uncomfortable, when you want to quit halfway through because the sentence you just wrote feels like wet cardboard.<\/p>\n
That\u2019s the work.<\/p>\n
To develop your writing system, identify specific habits like outlining themes, drafting quickly, and rewriting, because concrete practices make improvement tangible and achievable.<\/p>\n
1. Stop writing to impress. Start writing to be understood.<\/strong><\/p>\n Most legal writing problems aren\u2019t \u201cwriting\u201d problems. They\u2019re intention problems.<\/p>\n When lawyers sit down to write, too many of them are trying to:<\/p>\n That\u2019s how we end up with prose that\u2019s technically correct but emotionally dead. It reads like it was drafted by a committee that hates the reader.<\/p>\n If you take nothing else from this column, take this:<\/p>\n Your job is not to sound like a lawyer. Your job is to help a reader decide.<\/strong><\/p>\n That reader might be a judge who has 70 motions on the docket. Or an adjuster who is scanning your demand at 11:30 p.m., or a general counsel who is trying to explain your advice to a CEO who doesn\u2019t speak legal.<\/p>\n Write to be understood. Everything else is ego.<\/p>\n 2. Clarity is kindness.<\/strong><\/p>\n One of the most underrated forms of professionalism is making it easy for people to follow your thinking.<\/p>\n Clear writing says, \u201cI respect your time.\u201d<\/p>\n The unclear writing says: \u201cI\u2019m going to make you work for it.\u201d<\/p>\n Clarity isn\u2019t dumbing things down. It\u2019s doing the hard work up front, so the reader doesn\u2019t have to.<\/p>\n Want clarity? Start with structure.<\/p>\n Before you write a single paragraph, answer:<\/p>\n Most legal writing improves dramatically when the writer outlines like a trial lawyer: theme, roadmap, proof.<\/p>\n If you can\u2019t say your point in one sentence, you\u2019re not ready to write the brief. You\u2019re prepared to think.<\/p>\n 3. Overthinking is not preparation.<\/strong><\/p>\n Many lawyers confuse rumination with readiness.<\/p>\n They\u2019ll \u201cresearch\u201d for hours, keep 24 cases open on their screen, and then write three bloated pages that never land.<\/p>\n At some point, you have to stop circling the runway and take off.<\/p>\n Permit yourself to write an ugly first draft, fostering confidence and reducing fear of imperfection in your writing process.<\/p>\n Not a \u201crough\u201d draft. An ugly one.<\/p>\n Put the point on paper. Get the facts down. State the rule. Make the argument. Don\u2019t polish while you\u2019re drafting. Polishing too early kills momentum.<\/p>\n Drafting is for getting it out. Editing is for making it good.<\/p>\n Different muscles. Different phases. Don\u2019t blend them.<\/p>\n 4. The first draft is where you tell yourself the story. The rewrite is where you say to the reader.<\/strong><\/p>\n If you\u2019re not rewriting, you\u2019re not writing \u2014 you\u2019re typing.<\/p>\n And if you\u2019re a young lawyer, rewriting is where you separate yourself from the pack.<\/p>\n The best writers are not the ones who \u201cget it right the first time.\u201d They\u2019re the ones who are willing to cut, tighten, and clarify without getting emotionally attached to their original phrasing.<\/p>\n A mindset shift that helps: feedback is data, not a verdict.<\/strong><\/p>\n If a partner marks up your draft as if it owes them money, that\u2019s not a sign you\u2019re terrible. It\u2019s a sign you\u2019re in the arena, learning in public. The only people who don\u2019t get edited are the ones who don\u2019t write.<\/p>\n So don\u2019t sulk. Study the edits. Look for patterns. Are you:<\/p>\n That\u2019s the real lesson.<\/p>\n 5. Earn the reader\u2019s attention early by starting with a clear point or hook that makes them feel acknowledged and respected for their time.<\/strong><\/p>\n Legal writing has a bad habit: it starts slow.<\/p>\n \u201cCOMES NOW the Defendant\u2026\u201d<\/p>\n No. Stop. Your reader is not warmed up. They are not impressed. They are not settling in with a cup of tea, delighted to hear your thoughts.<\/p>\n They are busy.<\/p>\n Start with the hook. The point. The why-now.<\/p>\n Try openers like:<\/p>\n You can be professional without being ceremonial.<\/p>\n If you want to write persuasively, you have to take responsibility for the reader\u2019s attention span. Please don\u2019t make them hunt for the point, as if it were hidden in a scavenger hunt.<\/p>\n 6. Shorter is harder. Do the harder thing.<\/strong><\/p>\n Most lawyers over-write because it\u2019s safer.<\/p>\n More words feel like more protection. More caveats feel like fewer risks.<\/p>\n But in persuasion, extra words are usually extra exits for the reader.<\/p>\n Here\u2019s an exercise that will change your writing fast: After you finish a draft, try to cut 15%<\/strong> without losing meaning.<\/p>\n Then cut another 10%<\/strong>.<\/p>\n You\u2019ll be shocked at how much it improves when you eliminate:<\/p>\n Don\u2019t just \u201cedit.\u201d Cut with purpose.<\/p>\n Write like every sentence costs money.<\/p>\n 7. Learn to love plain words.<\/strong><\/p>\n \u201cUtilize\u201d is not better than \u201cuse.\u201d<\/p>\n \u201cIf\u201d is not better than \u201cif.\u201d<\/p>\n \u201cBefore\u201d is not better than \u201cbefore.\u201d<\/p>\n Fancy words don\u2019t elevate legal writing. They weaken it. Fancy language creates distance. Plain language creates trust.<\/p>\n And when you\u2019re writing for a client \u2014 especially a scared, stressed, non-lawyer client \u2014 plain language is empathy in action.<\/p>\n Your reader shouldn\u2019t need a decoder ring to understand what you\u2019re saying.<\/p>\n 8. Read it out loud. Yes, really.<\/strong><\/p>\n This is the most straightforward hack I know, and it\u2019s the one most lawyers refuse to do because it feels weird.<\/p>\n Read the draft out loud.<\/p>\n If you stumble over a sentence, your reader will stumble too.<\/p>\n If you run out of breath, the sentence is too long.<\/p>\n If it sounds like something no human would ever say, you\u2019ve drifted into Legalese Land.<\/p>\n Writing is spoken language cleaned up. If it doesn\u2019t sound like a person, it won\u2019t read like a person.<\/p>\n 9. Improve your writing the way you improve anything else: reps + review.<\/strong><\/p>\n If you want to become a better writer, don\u2019t make it mystical. Make it mechanical.<\/p>\n Here\u2019s a simple system you can run without changing your life:<\/p>\n Three reps a week:<\/strong><\/p>\n And here\u2019s the part most people skip:<\/p>\n Review.<\/strong> That\u2019s how you get better. Not by hoping. By tracking.<\/p>\n Significant improvement comes from boring daily math.<\/p>\n 10. Develop a voice by telling the truth \u2014 professionally.<\/strong><\/p>\n A lot of lawyers want \u201cvoice,\u201d but they\u2019re afraid of being human on the page.<\/p>\n Voice doesn\u2019t mean being dramatic. It means being real.<\/p>\n It means writing with:<\/p>\n If you\u2019re writing an email to opposing counsel, your \u201cvoice\u201d might be calm, direct, and firm. If you\u2019re writing to a client, it might be clear, steady, and reassuring. If you\u2019re writing a brief, it might be confident, organized, and restrained.<\/p>\n Voice is not personality for its own sake. It\u2019s the tone that earns trust in the context you\u2019re in.<\/p>\n And if you want to build that voice faster, write publicly sometimes. A short LinkedIn post. A bar newsletter. A practice-group note. Not to \u201cbuild a brand,\u201d but to get reps at explaining ideas clearly.<\/p>\n You don\u2019t get better by waiting for confidence. You get better by writing anyway.<\/p>\n A closing thought<\/strong><\/p>\n If you\u2019re a young lawyer and you feel behind, you\u2019re not.<\/p>\n Most lawyers never intentionally improve their writing. They keep producing pages and hoping the pages get better by osmosis.<\/p>\n They don\u2019t.<\/p>\n But if you decide \u2014 today \u2014 that you\u2019ll do reps and rewrites, you\u2019ll separate yourself quickly. Within a year, people will start saying, \u201cHave them draft it.\u201d And that\u2019s when doors open.<\/p>\n Writing is leverage in this profession.<\/p>\n It\u2019s how you persuade. It\u2019s how you lead. It\u2019s how you earn trust when you\u2019re not in the room.<\/p>\n So don\u2019t wait for a perfect schedule or perfect inspiration.<\/p>\n Write. Rewrite. Cut. Clarify.<\/p>\n And keep going \u2014 especially when it\u2019s ugly.<\/p>\n That\u2019s the part that counts.<\/p>\n Frank Ramos is a partner at Goldberg Segalla in Miami, where he practices commercial litigation, products, and catastrophic personal injury.\u00a0You can follow him on\u00a0LinkedIn<\/a>, where he has about 80,000 followers<\/em><\/strong>.<\/p>\n The post Writing Like A Lawyer Without Sounding Like A Lawyer<\/a> appeared first on Above the Law<\/a>.<\/p>\n Lawyers love to say they \u201cneed to work on their writing.\u201d<\/p>\n Translation: they\u2019ve read something they wrote, felt that little stomach drop, and thought, This doesn\u2019t sound like me. This doesn\u2019t even sound clear.<\/em><\/p>\n Here\u2019s the good news: writing isn\u2019t a talent. It\u2019s a skill. And skills respond to the same cure as every other skill: reps.<\/p>\n Not glamorous reps. Not the kind that gets applause.<\/p>\n The kind you do in small rooms, when no one is watching, when you\u2019re a little uncomfortable, when you want to quit halfway through because the sentence you just wrote feels like wet cardboard.<\/p>\n That\u2019s the work.<\/p>\n To develop your writing system, identify specific habits like outlining themes, drafting quickly, and rewriting, because concrete practices make improvement tangible and achievable.<\/p>\n 1. Stop writing to impress. Start writing to be understood.<\/strong><\/p>\n Most legal writing problems aren\u2019t \u201cwriting\u201d problems. They\u2019re intention problems.<\/p>\n When lawyers sit down to write, too many of them are trying to:<\/p>\n That\u2019s how we end up with prose that\u2019s technically correct but emotionally dead. It reads like it was drafted by a committee that hates the reader.<\/p>\n If you take nothing else from this column, take this:<\/p>\n Your job is not to sound like a lawyer. Your job is to help a reader decide.<\/strong><\/p>\n That reader might be a judge who has 70 motions on the docket. Or an adjuster who is scanning your demand at 11:30 p.m., or a general counsel who is trying to explain your advice to a CEO who doesn\u2019t speak legal.<\/p>\n Write to be understood. Everything else is ego.<\/p>\n 2. Clarity is kindness.<\/strong><\/p>\n One of the most underrated forms of professionalism is making it easy for people to follow your thinking.<\/p>\n Clear writing says, \u201cI respect your time.\u201d<\/p>\n The unclear writing says: \u201cI\u2019m going to make you work for it.\u201d<\/p>\n Clarity isn\u2019t dumbing things down. It\u2019s doing the hard work up front, so the reader doesn\u2019t have to.<\/p>\n Want clarity? Start with structure.<\/p>\n Before you write a single paragraph, answer:<\/p>\n Most legal writing improves dramatically when the writer outlines like a trial lawyer: theme, roadmap, proof.<\/p>\n If you can\u2019t say your point in one sentence, you\u2019re not ready to write the brief. You\u2019re prepared to think.<\/p>\n 3. Overthinking is not preparation.<\/strong><\/p>\n Many lawyers confuse rumination with readiness.<\/p>\n They\u2019ll \u201cresearch\u201d for hours, keep 24 cases open on their screen, and then write three bloated pages that never land.<\/p>\n At some point, you have to stop circling the runway and take off.<\/p>\n Permit yourself to write an ugly first draft, fostering confidence and reducing fear of imperfection in your writing process.<\/p>\n Not a \u201crough\u201d draft. An ugly one.<\/p>\n Put the point on paper. Get the facts down. State the rule. Make the argument. Don\u2019t polish while you\u2019re drafting. Polishing too early kills momentum.<\/p>\n Drafting is for getting it out. Editing is for making it good.<\/p>\n Different muscles. Different phases. Don\u2019t blend them.<\/p>\n 4. The first draft is where you tell yourself the story. The rewrite is where you say to the reader.<\/strong><\/p>\n If you\u2019re not rewriting, you\u2019re not writing \u2014 you\u2019re typing.<\/p>\n And if you\u2019re a young lawyer, rewriting is where you separate yourself from the pack.<\/p>\n The best writers are not the ones who \u201cget it right the first time.\u201d They\u2019re the ones who are willing to cut, tighten, and clarify without getting emotionally attached to their original phrasing.<\/p>\n A mindset shift that helps: feedback is data, not a verdict.<\/strong><\/p>\n If a partner marks up your draft as if it owes them money, that\u2019s not a sign you\u2019re terrible. It\u2019s a sign you\u2019re in the arena, learning in public. The only people who don\u2019t get edited are the ones who don\u2019t write.<\/p>\n So don\u2019t sulk. Study the edits. Look for patterns. Are you:<\/p>\n That\u2019s the real lesson.<\/p>\n 5. Earn the reader\u2019s attention early by starting with a clear point or hook that makes them feel acknowledged and respected for their time.<\/strong><\/p>\n Legal writing has a bad habit: it starts slow.<\/p>\n \u201cCOMES NOW the Defendant\u2026\u201d<\/p>\n No. Stop. Your reader is not warmed up. They are not impressed. They are not settling in with a cup of tea, delighted to hear your thoughts.<\/p>\n They are busy.<\/p>\n Start with the hook. The point. The why-now.<\/p>\n Try openers like:<\/p>\n You can be professional without being ceremonial.<\/p>\n If you want to write persuasively, you have to take responsibility for the reader\u2019s attention span. Please don\u2019t make them hunt for the point, as if it were hidden in a scavenger hunt.<\/p>\n 6. Shorter is harder. Do the harder thing.<\/strong><\/p>\n Most lawyers over-write because it\u2019s safer.<\/p>\n More words feel like more protection. More caveats feel like fewer risks.<\/p>\n But in persuasion, extra words are usually extra exits for the reader.<\/p>\n Here\u2019s an exercise that will change your writing fast: After you finish a draft, try to cut 15%<\/strong> without losing meaning.<\/p>\n Then cut another 10%<\/strong>.<\/p>\n You\u2019ll be shocked at how much it improves when you eliminate:<\/p>\n Don\u2019t just \u201cedit.\u201d Cut with purpose.<\/p>\n Write like every sentence costs money.<\/p>\n 7. Learn to love plain words.<\/strong><\/p>\n \u201cUtilize\u201d is not better than \u201cuse.\u201d<\/p>\n \u201cIf\u201d is not better than \u201cif.\u201d<\/p>\n \u201cBefore\u201d is not better than \u201cbefore.\u201d<\/p>\n Fancy words don\u2019t elevate legal writing. They weaken it. Fancy language creates distance. Plain language creates trust.<\/p>\n And when you\u2019re writing for a client \u2014 especially a scared, stressed, non-lawyer client \u2014 plain language is empathy in action.<\/p>\n Your reader shouldn\u2019t need a decoder ring to understand what you\u2019re saying.<\/p>\n 8. Read it out loud. Yes, really.<\/strong><\/p>\n This is the most straightforward hack I know, and it\u2019s the one most lawyers refuse to do because it feels weird.<\/p>\n Read the draft out loud.<\/p>\n If you stumble over a sentence, your reader will stumble too.<\/p>\n If you run out of breath, the sentence is too long.<\/p>\n If it sounds like something no human would ever say, you\u2019ve drifted into Legalese Land.<\/p>\n Writing is spoken language cleaned up. If it doesn\u2019t sound like a person, it won\u2019t read like a person.<\/p>\n 9. Improve your writing the way you improve anything else: reps + review.<\/strong><\/p>\n If you want to become a better writer, don\u2019t make it mystical. Make it mechanical.<\/p>\n Here\u2019s a simple system you can run without changing your life:<\/p>\n Three reps a week:<\/strong><\/p>\n And here\u2019s the part most people skip:<\/p>\n Review.<\/strong> That\u2019s how you get better. Not by hoping. By tracking.<\/p>\n Significant improvement comes from boring daily math.<\/p>\n 10. Develop a voice by telling the truth \u2014 professionally.<\/strong><\/p>\n A lot of lawyers want \u201cvoice,\u201d but they\u2019re afraid of being human on the page.<\/p>\n Voice doesn\u2019t mean being dramatic. It means being real.<\/p>\n It means writing with:<\/p>\n If you\u2019re writing an email to opposing counsel, your \u201cvoice\u201d might be calm, direct, and firm. If you\u2019re writing to a client, it might be clear, steady, and reassuring. If you\u2019re writing a brief, it might be confident, organized, and restrained.<\/p>\n Voice is not personality for its own sake. It\u2019s the tone that earns trust in the context you\u2019re in.<\/p>\n And if you want to build that voice faster, write publicly sometimes. A short LinkedIn post. A bar newsletter. A practice-group note. Not to \u201cbuild a brand,\u201d but to get reps at explaining ideas clearly.<\/p>\n You don\u2019t get better by waiting for confidence. You get better by writing anyway.<\/p>\n A closing thought<\/strong><\/p>\n If you\u2019re a young lawyer and you feel behind, you\u2019re not.<\/p>\n Most lawyers never intentionally improve their writing. They keep producing pages and hoping the pages get better by osmosis.<\/p>\n They don\u2019t.<\/p>\n But if you decide \u2014 today \u2014 that you\u2019ll do reps and rewrites, you\u2019ll separate yourself quickly. Within a year, people will start saying, \u201cHave them draft it.\u201d And that\u2019s when doors open.<\/p>\n Writing is leverage in this profession.<\/p>\n It\u2019s how you persuade. It\u2019s how you lead. It\u2019s how you earn trust when you\u2019re not in the room.<\/p>\n So don\u2019t wait for a perfect schedule or perfect inspiration.<\/p>\n Write. Rewrite. Cut. Clarify.<\/p>\n And keep going \u2014 especially when it\u2019s ugly.<\/p>\n That\u2019s the part that counts.<\/p>\n Frank Ramos is a partner at Goldberg Segalla in Miami, where he practices commercial litigation, products, and catastrophic personal injury.\u00a0You can follow him on\u00a0LinkedIn<\/a>, where he has about 80,000 followers<\/em><\/strong>.<\/p>\n The post Writing Like A Lawyer Without Sounding Like A Lawyer<\/a> appeared first on Above the Law<\/a>.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":" Lawyers love to say they \u201cneed to work on their writing.\u201d Translation: they\u2019ve read something they wrote, felt that little stomach drop, and thought, This doesn\u2019t sound like me. This doesn\u2019t even sound clear. Here\u2019s the good news: writing isn\u2019t a talent. It\u2019s a skill. 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